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Beautiful penciled thoughts time's slowly erasing.

by Steve__Anthony in Six-Word Memoirs on Jan 24, 2013 | add favorite | T-shirt

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Wench says,

Too sad, I don't like this one. I mean, I like it - it's well written. It just makes me so sad.

Staraj says,

"Beautiful indelibly-inked thoughts frustrating time indefinitely."

Naaaah . . . Steve__Anthony's eloquence gets my vote. Too many thoughts crowd the mind.

ShellDeFelice says,

This has MOTD all over it.

Staraj says,

Surely you don't mean: Too many thoughts crowd the mind.

NumbrOneAunt says,

this is both incredibly beautiful and almost unbearably sad. it makes me think of alzheimer's. i miss my mom.

NumbrOneAunt says,

this is both incredibly beautiful and almost unbearably sad. it makes me think of alzheimer's. i miss my mom.

L2L3 says,

Ditto about the Alzheimer's reference. My first thought. Could apply to any dementia. Nice one Stevio.

Dean6805 says,

I'm with those above: great memoir, Steve.

illuminatrix says,

Lovely six. It captures one of those pearlescent nuances of life. Memory is an odd but precious thing. But I like to think that this slow erosion of our mental edifices is ultimately a good thing. It allows us to reformulate our realities over time.

Steve__Anthony says,

Only life and love can break a heart.

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